REFLECTION about the poem Silent Love of Han Yong-Un?

Well there were some good lines that were very moving...I think the word "gone" is used too many times in the beginning and the line about "fearing parting in the store" is awkward because it takes away from the out of another time romantic feeling you were building. Did you read this out loud a few times to listen to how it sounds? I think it is a good beginning and it still needs some serious work. How did her death change the direction of your destiny?It doesn't really convince me that she is dead, but that she was just a casual infatuation that ended prematurely by her leaving...Did you want me to believe it was more?